The questions that James and Yoann raised in class this morning were, as always, relevant and worth some discussion time. Their supporting reasons were also thoughtful and clearly stated.
As the example paragraph in Quest shows, it is certainly possible to write a one paragraph answer to the question: What can be done about the problem of drug addiction? (p. 227) However, the same proposition can also be supported in an essay.
Which do you think gives stronger support for the proposition, the paragraph or the essay? Which is more persuasive?
If you really wanted to persuade others to your proposition, which would you use, the paragraph or the essay?
James's thesis statement,
number 11 on the list, is strong because he is clearly going to give three different supporting reasons for his proposition. Each reason needs to be stated, explained and developed enough to make clear how it supports his proposition. James could do that in one paragraph, or he could write an essay. Which do you think would be the better choice? Why?
I think the way his his proposition is written now might be a problem, as Sweet suggested, but it certainly seems good enough for him to start writing his essay. He might decide later, perhaps when he reviews his essay, that it would be a good idea to revise the thesis statement. Such revision is normal: you don't always know in advance how your essay will turn out, or what you will end up being able to support, so a final thesis statement is often quite different to the one that the essay started with. Your thesis statement is provisional until you have finished revising your essay.
Even if you only have one supporting reason (hopefully a very strong one), for your proposition, why might it be better to write an essay than a paragraph? If you disagree, as Yoann and Soojin did, why might a paragraph be a better choice than an essay?
Why do people usually write essays instead of paragraphs?
If you would like to disagree with me, that's fine. (Don't worry - I will support my opinion.)