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From George’s brief profile, I found that a student of fine art department can work for a big company as a scenic artist. I think he would be happy to do what he loved for a living. I studied drawing and painting at school and continued my training until I finished high school. Because my mom suggested me to study business at university so I was busy with subjects such as math, economics, accounting, and IT—I finally stopped drawing and painting. I just started working on my art project at the end of last year and I felt more relaxed at work. I got an advice from one of my colleagues that art can cure my anxiety and stress from work and I think it is true. At my full-time job, I usually deal with tight deadlines and it never stops. If I were Mario video game, I would have to fight with many challenges from stages to stages. I got chronic shoulder pain and neck pain last year. I went to see a doctor and he said that this happened from stress and anxiety. Sometimes, people cannot notice symptoms by themselves when they are tried and stress. I have no idea why I was able to be on the status for years. I read some article about neurosciences and I found that people need to balance their brains by doing activities that allow them to use the two sides of their brains—left hemisphere and right hemisphere. At my work, I use my left hemisphere to do calculation, discussion, and writing reports—I am obsessive by lots of thoughts. So at home or at weekends, I spend my times all day with my art project including painting and playing keyboard—in this way, I can stop thinking and get my right hemisphere to exercises. It works and I love it.
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Question
What about you? Do you think how important of art for businesses?
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Reference
- Brochlehurst, S. (2020, February, 21). The artistic wizard who brought Oz to life. Retrieved from https://www.bbc.com/news/uk-scotland-51502233
Since the BBC tells us that Steven Brocklehurst is the author of her chosen article, Emma has correctly written that first in her APA style reference citation that gives readers all the information we need to find her source. She has correctly written his name as Brocklehurst, S.
ReplyDeleteAnd because that name, Brocklehurst, is the first piece of information in the reference citation, Emma also tells us that piece of information in the (parenthetical) citation in her summary paragraph, which is a common academic style. Alternatively, Emma could have told us the author's name in her first sentence by writing, for example:
In "The artistic wizard who brought Oz to life", Steven Brocklehurst (2020) says that ....". Both styles are correct and common in academic work.
Thank you Emma for the excellent example.