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Saturday 30 October 2010
Is it morally wrong?
Sunday 24 October 2010
Should the law ban smoking in restaurants?
If you disagree, please feel to present your opposing argument.
If you agree, please feel free to explain why your classmates who think smoking should be banned are wrong.
Presenting your arguments here will be less formal but very useful practice for the academic writing assignment this week where you have to persuade us to agree with your proposed solution to a drug an alcohol related problem.
Relevance to this week's argumentative essay
Although my two theses are not answers to the questions on pages 224 - 227 of Hartmann (2007), they are related. More importantly, the arguments for and against exemplify an important point that is very relevant to an answer to all of Hartmann's questions; just as I was careful in the lecture to establish some basic facts: that cigarettes are deadly killers, that cigarettes are unhealthy for both smokers and those around them, and that tobacco is a highly addictive drug, so too do all of Hartmann's questions accept that alcohol and drugs are unhealthy. That is why the questions ask you to propose a solution: that there is a problem is already agreed to, so you do not need to present any support for that in the body of your essay, although you might like to include some shocking statistics or the like in your introduction. What your essay this week has to do is persuade us that your proposition really is an effective solution to the problem what we all agree is real; Hartmann does not ask you to persuade us that alcohol and drugs are a problem. Similarly, that cigarettes kill people is not by itself a reason to disagree with me about banning smoking or taxing them highly. My arguments accept that they are dangerous, addictive, offensive to many and generally bad news.
So, what do you think and why do you think that?
- Should cigarette smoking be legally banned in restaurants?
- Should cigarette taxes be high enough to discourage people from smoking?
To get them, send an email to peter.aua+quit@gmail.com
You will get an immediate automatic reply with the link to the presentation.
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Thursday 21 October 2010
What is one solution to the problem of drug addiction?
At first glance, both sound perhaps a bit silly, but they can nonetheless be written up as answers to the question.
Hartmann's question, from page 227 is: "What can be done about the problem of drug addiction?" (2007). Although worded differently, all of the questions offered for you to choose from on page 224 are asking for the same thing: a solution to a drug related problem.
The thesis statement that I'm going to support in an essay is:
For reasons that may appear purely economic but are essentially humane, the sale and use of all illicit drugs should be legalised, nor is there any foundation to the too common fears that such legalisation will lead to an increase in the number of addicts.
- the topic = the sale and use of all illicit drugs
- the main idea about that topic = it should be legalised = my proposed solution (which I've pretty much copied from Hartmann). The body of the essay has to give support to persuade my readers, especially those such as Bank with strong opposing arguments, that my proposition really is a solution to the problem of drug addiction. If I can't give solidly persuasive support for my thesis, I will fail.
Getting back to Poome's suggested solutions, which is why I started writing this blog post, which has wondered a little, I tried to think of some thesis statements where the proposition, what to do to achieve solve some problem, was similar to Poome's specific solutions. These are what I've come up with:
- Since it can develop the character traits of responsibility and discipline needed to enjoy social drug use safely and responsibly, parents should give their children a pet cat or dog on the child's thirteenth birthday.
I think that "feed cats" is a bit too narrow, and not something I would want to support as a solution to the problem of drug addiction, but it might be possible to make a reasonably persuasive case for the value of caring for a pet. Of course, it might not be possible, in which case we should drop this answer and look for a new one, such as - In order to teach habits of independence, self-respect and team work, schools should regularly take students above the age of 10 on wilderness trips, which will provide them with the strength of character to say "No" to drugs.
Again, "plant trees" did not seem promising to me, but it suggested the above, which might be supportable. I haven't done the research or given it much thought, but is does sound like a strong answer to the question.
What do you think of provisional thesis statements 1. and 2. above?
Do you have a more interesting solution to suggest? I mean something unexpected or surprising. If you can successfully support something that surprises or shocks, it's likely to be a very good essay.
Wednesday 20 October 2010
AEP Lecture: Are laws banning smoking in restaurants just?
You can also view "Quit Now! It's the Right Thing to Do" in your browser as a Google Presentation.
Sunday 17 October 2010
TI-the rapper in jail
This weekend was my very busy weekend. Therefore, my news summary quite delay this time. Because of my busy and stressful weekend; for this reason, I want to read some relaxing news. I started to look at the entertainment news. When I saw the title "TI sentenced to 11 months in jail for parole violation" on the BBC News website, it caught my eye when I saw his picture because I know his song but I am not a big fan of him. I don't know much about him and I don't know what happened with him, so I want to check it out. Actually, this story not very serious news because it's about an entertainer, but actually there are some serious things to think about.
The rapper begged the judge to pity him and to not send him to jail. He said, "I screwed up big time, and I'm sorry...I don't want and I don't need to sue drugs anymore. I want them out of my life". But the judge didn't feel bad for him because he has a lot of second chances already.
There are many stories in news about famous entertainers doing drugs, driving drunk, and other bad behaviors. The main issue that always comes up is "should famous people be good role models?" because many young people listen to them and watch them and admire them so much. Is it worse for someone like this do get in trouble than someone who is not famous? Is it their responsibility to be good role models or not?
TI sentenced to 11 months in jail for parole violation. (2010, October 17). BBC News. Retrieved October 17, 2010 from http://www.bbc.co.uk/news/entertainment-arts-11561065
Saturday 16 October 2010
When the Beat Came in a Box
Mr. Owerko, the famous photographer from the cover image of Time magazine- the smashed World Trade Center, took close-up photographs of vintage portable stereos. He depicted the story of New York’s street culture from the late 1970s to the mid-’80s by featuring with commentators and published a book named “The Boombox Project: The Machines, the Music, and the Urban Underground.” It reminds everyone who grows up in the pre-CD era and shows the development of the stereos’ design.
The admiration for audio culture and the development of technology led us to think about ourselves which sometimes life is influenced by music. Music’s one mechanic to show culture, express emotions and tell the story of society through media. Music machine developed rapidly and non stop for responses to human consumptions. It responds interchangeably material culture and visual culture but rhythm and lyrics are static. The contexts of design stereo include social, cultural, technical and aesthetic by focusing towards the acts of production and consumption. The most obvious effect is set by marketing and advertisement which tell consumer to change all the time. They earn money from consumers’ obsessions. I think for one good stereo can work in 10 years but when we look on advertisement or hear news from everywhere that can change our mind to buy the new one in recent year. However, it depends on quality. Before vintage portable stereos period, we have gramophone record which are never die and most wanted.
Nowadays, we have many options of stereos such as iPod, iPhone, mp3, dvd player. What machine do you imagine that coming next? Is it possible that we back to origin again?
Thursday 14 October 2010
Sound Sleepers' Brain Waves Block Sounds
Do you think our class starts too early? I think that.
Moreover, when our class comes to the third week, most my classmate seem sleepy in every morning. Therefore, I search information about sleep because it might be help you feel active more. Because it about health, I search on Scientific American, and I find interesting information in that article, “Sound Sleepers' Brain Waves Block Sounds”. It might be too old but I think it is very interesting information.
That article tells us that why sleepers can carry on sleep while sounds happen. In fact, the loud noise can wake up sleepers but in some cases sleepers can keep on sleep, so scientist experiment to find the cause of those cases. The scientist found that brain can block noise to access to the auditory nerve so some sleepers can keep on even there are loud noises.
I believe that everyone used to nap in a classroom or in an office and this information can explain why we can do that what how loud in that place. The human body always surprises me by its abilities and thank for scientist who discover those body’s secrets. However, I think that even if a brain can block noises, the sleep in suitable place and time have still been importance.
Moreover, if we can sleep in peaceful place more than 8 hours, we might not feel sleepy in AEP class. HaHa!
Wednesday 13 October 2010
To rescue Chile’s trapped miners
Following the news, on August 5, a tunnel of San Jose mine in Chile collapsed; therefore, thirty-tree men have been trapped about 700 m below ground.
After the accident, the government and the authorities attempt to rescue the trapped miners immediately, and today, October 13, they are sending down an empty capsule "Phoenix" to pick up the trapped miners to the surface.
There are many plans to aid the trapped miners since they arrive to the surface to they go to a hospital because they have lived in underground which is 32 degree Celsius and dark for long time. For example, before going up to the surface, the trapped miners have to wear coat to protect themselves from cold air outside and they have to wear sun glasses for protecting their eyes.
Referring the news, I got the idea from the rescue plans; moreover, I so appreciate with their teamwork, and after I read this sentence "when Chile is united, we are capable of doing great things", there are a lot of feeling happen in my mind. One of them makes me think of Tsunami at south of Thailand. In this adversity lead us know that we love each other, and today, do we still love each other?
Bullfighting banned in Catalonia. Politic and morality.
Bullfighting banned in Catalonia. Politic and morality.
The problem with the modern decline of morals
Christmas is one of the few traditions that most Westerners still share. Could the loss of such traditions and the values they help to inculcate be responsible for the West's alleged moral decline? (Law, 2003, p. 93)Since Ko's latest comment on our discussion about George killing Lennie has directly raised questions about the nature and basis of morality (October 12, 2010 11:32 PM), this seems a good time for some pre-discussion on the coming ideas.
So, what is your response to the first two sentences from Stephen Law's 17 page essay?
Added October 14
And what about Thailand?
Are there allegations of any similarly caused moral decline in Thailand? Who says such things? Are they right or are they talking nonsense?
Tuesday 12 October 2010
Why do patient die from parasite disease in Sudan?
In Sudan, it rises parasite disease, known as kala-azar, and make many people to die and infect. The patients infect from biting of sand-fly which has Visceral leishmaniasis to be caused of disease. A cause that make patients increase, is people far from health facility so patients can’t treat or protect in time.
In my opinion, it has many diseases in the world but some disease doesn’t a severe disease. In Africa, disease isn’t severe, can make patients to die because health facility can’t access to all area. In Sudan, people won’t die and infect parasite disease if health facility access all the area and government has policy to protect people from this disease.
Virgin Galactic's spaceship makes solo flight
First human trial of embryonic stem cells
Do we know about embryonic stem cell? Most embryonic stem cells are derived from embryos that develop from eggs that have been fertilized in vitro—in an in vitro fertilization clinic. I found news about "First human trial of embryonic stem cells" today and I interesting this news from BCC NEWS.
Geron Corporation is a biotechnology company, Geron received The Food and Drug Administration approval to begin embryonic stem cells testing in humans.The research will use cells coaxed to become nerve cells which are injected into the spinal cord.Geron use paralysed rats in experiment and rats can revived some movement, and then they try to experiment in human.Geron president Dr Thomas Okarma said:"This accomplishment results from extensive research and development and a succession of inventive steps". Many people in the US had an accident in spinal cord every years and stem cell can treatment.
In my opinion, many people don't know about stem cells. It's a good thing, but sometime I think it's not safe enough.
First human trial of embryonic stem cells. (2010, October 11). BBC News. Retrieved October 11, 2010 from http://www.bbc.co.uk/news/health-11517680
Monday 11 October 2010
The country which's intelligent most !!
Apparently, you can see me feel sleepy in the class because I wasn't sleep enough last nigh but after I had read the article "Which country has the best brains?" From BBC News, my eyes grew open because It interesting a lot.
Nobel prize's been established by Alfred Nobel for 109 years ago and more than 500 prices have been award and It's for people who benefit to our world and human. The country which get the prize most is United State and they still being No.1 in almost every fields except literature because France is the most popular in that way.
Actually, I never interested in such topic but today I was looking at it because I hope Thailand would be on the list but I found nothing about Thailand; however, I'm not surprise that US is the one of almost many field because the quality of citizen might be better than other.
Sunday 10 October 2010
Philippines air crew dances through the safety demo
Do you have any plans to travel by air? If you have, you will see the safety demonstration on your personal TV or by flight attendants on the plane. However mostly passengers don’t pay attention to the demonstration. Each air carrier is struggling about how to draw the passenger’s attention to the safety demonstration.
According to the article “Philippines air crew dances through the safety demo”, the Philippines Low-cost carrier (LCC), Cebu Pacific finds an answer by a unique performance. They are successful to grab the passenger’s attention to the air safety demonstration by its female crew’s dance with a Lady Gaga tune. Dance moves with instructions about how to use lifejackets, air masks and find the emergency exits are demonstrated instead of normal demonstration. Now male version is available. Both female version and male version dances have millions hits on YouTube.
I doubt if passengers understand correctly how to use the emergency equipments and find the way to exit through the dance. It seems to be ridiculous for me. Is it Okay that the most important introduction for the safety is informed merry and roughly!? I have had some chances to take LCC flights, but I have never had a good impression for their flight. I thought “L” of LCC is “L” of low service! ; no punctuality, no crews are available when I needed to ask or help and no smile… the advantage is just its cheaper price only.
Nowadays LCC is increasing its market share and becoming popular all over the world. To offer cheap prices, of course they have to cut down their costs, besides to compete with their rivals, they need plus something. Showing the unique performance without much expense, Cebu pacific is successful to promote their company’s name. We are welcome to be offered cheaper air fare. Moreover I hope they would spend much more time for improve their services as same as spending the time to practice dance.
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References
Philippines air crew dances through the safety demo. (2010, October 8) BBC News. Retrieved October 9, 2010 from http://www.bbc.co.uk/news/world-asia-pacific-11498663
Saturday 9 October 2010
“Small Scale, Big Change”
The new approaches are present in architectural projects of new generation architects. 11 impressive projects are designed for lower-income area around the world. The Museum of Modern Art in New York sets up the exhibition called “Small Scale, Big Change” to follow this project becoming more active and accessible by people of all kinds. They believe in smart design can solve social problems. The buildings are managed and developed in various ways; for example, financial construction cost, architectural design, local material. In pictures, one of interesting projects, a new primary school in Burkina Faso, was built from local materials-mud bricks and local labours.
I would like all of you to change visions the good architecture’s not responded to extremely wealthy people and used the money for higher expanses. Especially thousands of years ago, humans build a house for living in and a church for their belief. The main point is not related to money but it is related to answer the social problems; for example, habitable places, public ceremonial places, government offices. After that, in modern society, approach is changing to commercial buildings related to money, advertisement and capitalism. Normal people are far and away from architectural knowledge. They always judge architecture as a place to visit, take photos, and leave. Now the new announcement comes and appears in public for environmentally and social responsibility- sustainability. This announcement is greatly encouraged someone by making them feel confident and eager to do the good small things for changing to more powerful. Just like Barack Obama said, “Change. We can believe in.” They learn to use their knowledge as tools mixing up with basically local techniques and materials. They make a positive effect and follow concept-think global act local (David Brower, 1969). If you are interested in this small project, please join, give supporting and visit us at “Small Scale, Big Change”.
Friday 8 October 2010
Post on Facebook get students in trouble
Nowadays, we have many social networks that help us to keep in contact with people such as hi5 and facebook. Especially facebook, I think many of you are on it, right? When I saw the title "India Student suspended for rude Facebook messages" on the BBC News website, it caught my eye because I use facebook, so I want to check out what happens in this story?
Trimming the fat
Thursday 7 October 2010
Gulf oil spill commission criticises White House
Actually, I intended to pick up the relaxing news because we feel stress too much in class. Is that right? Haha. However, the environment news always catch me eyes like Gift, and after I read it, I consider that this news are relevant with the environment, the politic, and surely the judgment rigt or wrong. Therefore, I picked up this news to talk about. That is “Gulf oil spill commission criticises White House” on BBC Online.
Do you now BP oil’s event in Gulf of Mexico?
This new tells me about the hidden agenda of that event.
On 20 April, there is the explosion on the Deepwater Horizon drilling rig of BP Company. Innumerable oil spill to the surface of the sea and cover huge space of Gulf of Mexico. This is the biggest environmental accident of The US and it destroys the tourism and local fishing industry. BP can stop the spilling of on 15 July; however effects of this accident are too enormous to estimate. A lot of organizes are blamed to respond this event including US’ government. White House is blamed that it controlled the information of that event and hides the real of its cost. The Government do not make public the a worst case scenario which report by National Oceanic and Atmospheric Administration but choose to publish by a worst case scenario of White house which is too optimistic. Moreover, on first 10 days of oil spilling, the government controls the information by presenting that BP can handle this problem.
I had followed this news since it was published and I thought it finish, but now its affect seem longer than I thought and it affect to economy, politic, and environment. The environment is premier effect. This event impacts to sea ecology deeply. The deaths of sea animals affect surely to birds and the effect cover US and other countries in Gulf of Mexico. This is the one of the biggest disaster of the world. For politic, White House are blamed the on of cause of this disaster because of the too positive thinking and the controlling information of government. For the economic, now the tourism in that area and local fishing industry are destroyed till all of oil is removed.
I think the government has to have good reasons to do that such as to protect economy, to not make chaos of society, or for the stability of state, ETC. Are the right reasons to hide the truth from citizens? or you think there are beter reason.
Brazil minidress row student compensated
According to the article, Brazil minidress row student compensated, a student who dresses with short red dress goes to Bandeirante university in Sao Paulo for attendance class. Her name is Geisy Arruda with 21 years old. When she went into the class with that cloth, she was expelled because of disturbing classes. She was blamed that she did not respect for ethical principle, and lack in academic dignity and morality. After that she felt that she was trampled her dignity severely. Therefore, she sued her university, and got compensation about $23,600 (£14,840) after the civil court judges that the action of the university was intolerance, and discrimination.
I don't know about appearance of the dress exactly. How short was it?, but the news reports that her dress was deemed too short by official. That is her dressing is not suiable to wear for attendance. Moreover, it is a strange news for me because a woman who wore too short dress got compensation from the university though she lacked in respect of university honor. It seems the university does not have any authority. Do you think that the university did the right way which was expelling?
Wednesday 6 October 2010
Why do film stars work for international organization?
Which column do you start to read on a newspaper? In my case, I start to read an entertainment column first to cheer up myself before I start to read the environmental news. Nothing is interesting in the entertainment column, but while I was looking for the environmental news, Angelina Jolie picture in “UN in fresh appeal for Pakistan flood victims” attract my attention. This pushes me to open this page to follow the news.
The news said “The UN has made a fresh appeal for Pakistan's flood victims as film star Angelina Jolie has arrived in the country to highlight their plight.”
The news reported that half of the districts in Sindh province have been affected by the flooding and they had been waiting for helping from various channels, including the UN's official.
After I read the news, I realize that approximately one-third of the new shows about Angelina’s doing; for example, what does she do, and what does she think which these sentences make me want to read the news.
In my opinion, I think that many international organizations like the UN would like to attract the attention of people around the world to interest in their actions; therefore, they need someone to be their ambassador like a film star, Angelina Jolie. But what are the reasons that lead film stars work for them?