NAT's response writing

In Korean culture, for long time ago, people who suffer from mental illness often deny that they have a problem. Nowaday, Korea people are generally open to psychological therapy. In my opinion, people in many countries in the world tend to have psychological therapy because social averge is accept that it's acceptable for peolple who suffer from abnornal psychology to have therapy. It encourages people to manage their mentally ill before it causes a serious problem to them. In addition, it's a good idea to learn your mental and to know how to overcome your mentally problems. Situation in 21st century, there are many competetions in people life such as competetion in work to get promotion, students study hard in order to gain university , or getting higher rating on TV show. The more competetions, the more mentally illness. Therefore, people who concern much about their health tend to not only get physical healthy, but also get mentally healthy. I personally believe that not only Korean people are generally open to psychology therapy, but also people in many countries accept to have psychology therapy. In the future, people would have enough knowledge to know and to overcome their mentally ill. Moreover, they could help their relatives to manage abnormal psychology.