I agree with your main idea which is Gemma does have some rather good arguments up her sleeve. Because she is a teenager now, her attitude is kind of rebelling against her parent. I don't deny whether she eat the meat or not. Even though she is on a diet, she should not reject to eat the special dinner. It looks like childish excuse. While she looks selfish, she has a lot of bothers and problems that she can not solve them by herself.
I expect you to show us many problems she is facing now in next 25 pages. It's gonna be clear her reason why she did that. I am interested in her parent correspondence against her. I am also concerned about her prosess of growing and changing of mind.
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