Tuesday 3 March 2009

An's response to Law

I agree with Law, the teenagers are increasingly becoming vegetarians. In my opinion, there are 3 reason for them to do that.
The frist reason: vegetable is better for health more than meat, and they don't want to be fat body.
The second reason: what they learnt from school to protect the animals.
The third reason: their belief.
However, We need to get enough nutrition. If you eat only vegetable you can't get enough protein to provide energy for your activities, or if you eat only meat it will be easy for you to get fat, and also easy to get heart disease.
There are just some my ideas. Please comment your idea if you see it not enough.

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  1. Writing what you've got so far is fine. This is a response writing. As long as your ideas are clear, you have succeeded!

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