Thursday 1 May 2014
Jan's Academic Interests
My academic interests is about eating sweets like Macarons, Chocolates, Ice-Creams and honey toasts etc. The reason why I'm interested in eating sweets because every time when I eat, I feel like I'm going to heaven.I feel so good inside and outside. Moreover, I feel better when I eat some sweets after I get tired from works or moody. You know that eating some sweets help you a lot become a cheerful person. By the way, my grandfather loves eating chocolate then he always share some chocolate to me and my brother, I never see him as moody person because he always eat chocolate. Unfortunately, eating sweets will make you're getting fat but I don't care because I will eat sweets only on weekends, not every day. I suggest you that if you love eating sweets, don't forget to have some exercise.
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You interesting sounds good. I also love sweets very much. They can make me feel happy and enjoyable. I think so that we should a little bit concern about exercise after eat them.
ReplyDeleteSo do I. I like many kinds of sweets which are not too much sweet. If I were an internship in field of pastry art, I would not miss to learn how to make chocolate art products.
ReplyDeleteAfter you learn you may share how to make it.
DeleteI like sweets too. I think they not only make me feel happy but also relax me from some stressful situations. However, I agree which Nan told in the first comment. We need to concern about our health and weight after eating them.
ReplyDeleteMaybe we should looking for interesting exercise like Yoga, dancing or sports.
DeleteI enjoyed reading your article. When I read it, I saw pictures in my head. I like the way you put feelings into words. I especially like the sentences, 'The reason why I'm interested in eating sweets because every time when I eat, I feel like I'm going to heaven.I feel so good inside and outside.' By reading this, I felt good too. Thank you for that. And by the way, your grandfather seems to be a very nice guy. Lucky you to have a lovely grandfather.
ReplyDeleteI suspect that Leo will also like some of the ideas in Jan's post - his first draft of the passion paragraph was about eating chocolate, which I thought was a great topic. One of my topics is eating duck.
ReplyDeleteI love eating chocolate too, It can relax me a lot when stressful time.
ReplyDeleteUnfortunately, I don't only eat it on weekends but almost everyday. That's why I'm getting bigger continuously.
I'm the one whose really love dark chocolate. because of diabetes problems so I have to be careful by choosing less sugar dessert such as yogurt or muesli. There's always dark chocolate in my kitchen so I can eat it anytime when I'm stressed.
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